I have watched your face cringe
At the sight of me
I have heard you say you hate me
The nights have refused to go
Darkness blankets our lives
Suffocating us
In the depths of its palms
So all we do is fight,
Fighting ourselves
Because we’re too frightened
To step outside and face our tragedy
I have watched your doubts grow
Fuelled by absence of affection
In words I say
The black soot of doom
Encapsulated the promises I made
I couldn’t keep them anymore
We’ve morphed into new beings
Oblivious of what love means
Can’t we coexist even in hate?
This bull-matador affair
We’ll leave us bruised
I want to touch a part of you
The scariest parts you’ve always
Concealed with a fake smile
I want to feel them
These parts you’ve never introduced me to
They might as well love the stranger
My dear, can’t we stop worrying?
Whatever happens
Or fails to happen
We belong to us
We can weather the storm
And still be warm with love
There are still parts of me that ache
From prickles in every word you said
But, I still believe
That …
Miracles are wrapped in darkness
The last line is so powerful!
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Thanks. I thought it was just ordinary
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You’re welcome.
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Moving piece.
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Thank you so much for the read and feedback
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Love this, specially towards the end. 🙂
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Thank you so much. If you won’t mind what spark did you find near the end?
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We can weather the storm And still be warm with love There are still parts of me that ache From prickles in every word you said But, I still believe That … Miracles are wrapped in darkness.
-These lines were beautifully said. Very true.
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Thanks so much for such detailed feedback
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This poem is so beautiful! Can relate to it. 🙂
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That’s the beauty of poetry: It’s the abstract that speaks of the reality in our lives.
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Some very memorable lines in this that have hit me somewhere deeper than I can quite articulate. I just wanted to say I loved the lines:
“Whatever happens
Or fails to happen
We belong to us” and “miracles are wrapped in darkness”.
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Thanks so much Emily for the read…some truths are deep and dark but we’ve gotta walk through it.
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